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William Pauley III's avatar

Ha! Wonderfully weird. It reads like a monolouge in a one-act play. Love it. 👏

Teri's avatar

Guffawing & snorting with ROFL!! Michele, I 'm LOVING these fun short stories! "So the Police are Asking Questions seminar"!!!! Pls write a story! I'm 67. In mid '60's my Mom took me along when knocking on doors "Avon Calling!". Whoa, does that take me back!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

LOL! Thank you, Teri! A whole book of Ellie Evers and Merry Makeup? Heheheheheheh.

Karyn Mobley's avatar

From what I've read: yes, please!!!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Well, hell. I guess I'm writing a Merry Makeup book, lol.

Arial Burnz's avatar

OMG yes! That would be great!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

I love writing these little stories of Revlon revenge.

Arial Burnz's avatar

Literary revenge is the best!!

Dr. Levent Mollamustafaoğlu's avatar

Brilliant dark humour...

Liz Zimmers's avatar

Ahhahaha! “John goo”! This is so wickedly witty and, dare I say, FUN!

Arial Burnz's avatar

Bwuahahahahahaha! I love it! I've known enough Johns in the world to really appreciate this story. Thanks, Michele!!