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I was hooked straight away. Quickly creating imagery in a reader's mind is vital, and you do it so well.

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Thank you! I love the idea of creating vivid imagery with minimum words. Micro-fiction is such a wonderful Medium to explore.

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Mar 16Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

Whoa! Very nice. I got a little teary eyed at the end. :)

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Thank you!

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Mar 16Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

it feels like the wrong word but the one that comes to me is beautiful.

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Thank you. I'm struggling with the naming of the thing I'm creating. But I remind myself I can change titles/words later if needed.

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Mar 16Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

titles are slippery things

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