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William Pauley III's avatar

👏👏👏

Hanna Delaney's avatar

It's just like the end of the film when the ominous entity is gone and the sun shines again.

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

It's brighter here even when it rains. :-)

Vaunda Bonnett's avatar

I sometimes think I don't like poetry, then I read something like this and realized I do like poetry.

ceells1968@yahoo.com's avatar

Just needs a little ominous music

Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

such a powerful thing to realize. i posted today about the freedom i found from my divorce.

K.C. Knouse's avatar

Hey, Michele, don't hold back. Let it all out.. Tell him what you really think.;) Devastating!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Holding back was always my problem. I won't do that anymore. Thanks for reading, K.C.

Katja's avatar

Thank you for that beautiful poem. It resonated within my soul.

Lori K's avatar

Wow, did that hit home!! Thank you!!

Lorelei Kahn's avatar

I totally feel this. ❤️

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

I know you do, girl. We fall in love with the same kind of asshole.

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Truth. Let's stop doing that shit.

EJ Trask's avatar

YES.

Chele Schenck's avatar

Perfection!!!

Bill Hiatt's avatar

The poem communicates the underlying emotions quite well.