This one put a lump in my throat. There are many forms of letting go in life, but this is the ultimate. In fact, in this instance, it is not really a letting go but rather a breaking away. She pried his hand open. Beautifully written with a moment of hope just before the end. This is one piece that will stay with me for a long time.
I agree with Keith, intensely immersive, all the anguish is there in a few words
Thank you so much, Posy. I appreciate your kind comment!
Wow. I wouldn’t have thought you could get a reader emotionally invested in characters with so little information about them
Holy crap this was intense! Gripping flash fiction, amazing!
Thank you so much!
This one put a lump in my throat. There are many forms of letting go in life, but this is the ultimate. In fact, in this instance, it is not really a letting go but rather a breaking away. She pried his hand open. Beautifully written with a moment of hope just before the end. This is one piece that will stay with me for a long time.
Thank you so much, K.C.!
I really enjoyed this piece!
Very tense.
Thank you!
starting with the cliffhanger. i love it.
Heh. I adore you.
Wrenching! I don’t think I breathed until the end.
My job is done. Also, you're a master at that, too!
and that sacrifice is true love !
Sometimes not even love can save us.
Falling is one of the ultimate nightmares.
Right?!