This one put a lump in my throat. There are many forms of letting go in life, but this is the ultimate. In fact, in this instance, it is not really a letting go but rather a breaking away. She pried his hand open. Beautifully written with a moment of hope just before the end. This is one piece that will stay with me for a long time.
Holy crap this was intense! Gripping flash fiction, amazing!
Thank you so much!
This one put a lump in my throat. There are many forms of letting go in life, but this is the ultimate. In fact, in this instance, it is not really a letting go but rather a breaking away. She pried his hand open. Beautifully written with a moment of hope just before the end. This is one piece that will stay with me for a long time.
Thank you so much, K.C.!
I really enjoyed this piece!
Very tense.
starting with the cliffhanger. i love it.
Wrenching! I don’t think I breathed until the end.
and that sacrifice is true love !
Falling is one of the ultimate nightmares.