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Aaron McDonald's avatar

Very fun read. I’m afraid if she was real, she’d already have converted 90% of men on the planet. We’re just stupid like that 🤷🏻

The truly disturbing thing is there’s a genuine part of me that’s thinking getting converted would be worth it.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

LOL. If you become a Convert there's no backing out...

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Aaron McDonald's avatar

I’ll be the exception

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Of course, you will. There's always one.

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

This tale is a powerful allegory for addiction. I enjoyed the irony in the name Grace and the way you gradually turned up the heat on the horror.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you!

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Ika Wright's avatar

Wow, this was quite a ride. Grace is one femme fatale. It takes some mental fortitude in a man to fight her temptation. Thank you for sharing this steamy horror.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you so much, Ika!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Excellent! More!

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thanks, Liz!

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