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Really good story, keeping the suspense without giving it all away...

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Apr 13Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

fantastic! I love the dialogue in the funeral scene, it’s so beautiful.

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Apr 13Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

I had a suspicion about what happened, but “3-1 =2” went right over my head.

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Apr 12Liked by Author Michele Bardsley

Reading it, I can see why it won...

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