Go. Go. Go.
The immediacy of the short sentences heighten the desperation to escape and the tension in the chase. It is always satisfying to end a piece by circling back to the beginning. Masterful job of writing, Michele.
Thank you, K.C. You're always so kind.
Yikes. That was tense stuff. Great job, Michele. - Jim
Thank you so much!
Fast paced and scary!
Short and packs a punch in it!
Thank you!
Of course!
Loved it, brilliant.
My favorite bit is, "He’s a monster. How could I believe he ever loved me?"
For me, it made the narrator instantly relatable and added so much depth that I wanted to read more!
Brutal! ❤️
This one definitely puts you right into the dark, brutal action. Impossible to look away from. Great post, Michele.
Holy shit! So powerful. Beautifully written.
You never miss.
The immediacy of the short sentences heighten the desperation to escape and the tension in the chase. It is always satisfying to end a piece by circling back to the beginning. Masterful job of writing, Michele.
Thank you, K.C. You're always so kind.
Yikes. That was tense stuff. Great job, Michele. - Jim
Thank you so much!
Fast paced and scary!
Short and packs a punch in it!
Thank you!
Of course!
Loved it, brilliant.
My favorite bit is, "He’s a monster. How could I believe he ever loved me?"
For me, it made the narrator instantly relatable and added so much depth that I wanted to read more!
Brutal! ❤️
This one definitely puts you right into the dark, brutal action. Impossible to look away from. Great post, Michele.
Holy shit! So powerful. Beautifully written.
You never miss.
Thank you!