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K.C. Knouse's avatar

The immediacy of the short sentences heighten the desperation to escape and the tension in the chase. It is always satisfying to end a piece by circling back to the beginning. Masterful job of writing, Michele.

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Yikes. That was tense stuff. Great job, Michele. - Jim

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