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Liz Zimmers's avatar

oh, poor brave little Benjamin! I'm so glad he escaped, and I hope he will be well.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thanks so much, Liz!

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Honeygloom's avatar

😭I’m so happy for Benjamin. What great characters!

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you, @Honeygloom!

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V Kelly-Sibley's avatar

Brilliant! It's always good when a baddy gets it in the end. Love the description, I was there in the house watching and hoping she'd be pushed!

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

I didn't know how it would end, but it turned out the kid was made of tough stuff. Thanks for your kind words!

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Travis Blake's avatar

That was a tough read but a satisfying ending.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you.

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Alan Grainger's avatar

Terrifying, chilling and brilliantly written. I could even feel the sunlight as he finally opened the door.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Chris Patrick's avatar

Absolutely chilling, and brilliantly written.

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you!

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Aaron McDonald's avatar

I’m glad it was a happy ending. Very fun

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Me, too. Mommy got what she deserved.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"No wire hangers- ever!"

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Okay, Mommy Dearest.

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