16 Comments
User's avatar
Liz Zimmers's avatar

oh, poor brave little Benjamin! I'm so glad he escaped, and I hope he will be well.

Honeygloom's avatar

😭I’m so happy for Benjamin. What great characters!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you, @Honeygloom!

V Kelly-Sibley's avatar

Brilliant! It's always good when a baddy gets it in the end. Love the description, I was there in the house watching and hoping she'd be pushed!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

I didn't know how it would end, but it turned out the kid was made of tough stuff. Thanks for your kind words!

Travis Blake's avatar

That was a tough read but a satisfying ending.

Alan Grainger's avatar

Terrifying, chilling and brilliantly written. I could even feel the sunlight as he finally opened the door.

Chris Patrick's avatar

Absolutely chilling, and brilliantly written.

Aaron McDonald's avatar

I’m glad it was a happy ending. Very fun

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Me, too. Mommy got what she deserved.

David Perlmutter's avatar

"No wire hangers- ever!"