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A.P. Murphy's avatar

What a trip! Such grisly fun and a very nasty man gets his comeuppance. Chihuahua strong!

C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Delightfully horrifying!

Liz Zimmers's avatar

Too good! Princess gets her revenge! Love this.

V Kelly-Sibley's avatar

Oh that was GOOOD! I so love the twist at the end, it added a whole new level to the story.

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thanks, V! You’re the best!

Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Chapter two: Abbeville Prison. Day one, old man gets a cell mate, a cute little chihuahua named princess that the state mandated for him to take care of.

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

He'll never get rid of her. Never. Chihuahuas are for life. And death.

Arial Burnz's avatar

Holy shit!!! LOL Daham, woman! Totally demented and absolutely fantastic! Great writing!

Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

Thank you, Arial! You're pretty damned fantastic yourself!

Arial Burnz's avatar

Awww! *blushes*

Jennifer Morrow's avatar

What a twist!